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Re: Imaginary: Part 2
OMG! Where is the third part? Hurry: write, write, write! I want more. (:
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 1
This is great! I love it, though I didn't think I would at first. I normally don't like stories like this, but you hooked me in! Great job on this; ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: In my Box
This is very interesting. It is different from other poetry I have read, but it says a lot. I really liked it! Capitalize the word Bible at the end, but ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Molly McCoys
Awesome! This is hilarious, and so much fun. I love it!
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Losing Myself in You
Hmmm... Well, I love it! I think you should really add more, though. The end feels kind of chopped of, you know? It would be awesome if you could finish ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Daddy's Little Plaything
Wow, that ending really shocked me! I love it though; the story was great!
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Why Me?
Hey, I'm first! Awesome. And I also just realized you're only thirteen. Hope I wasn't too harsh. (:
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Secrets
Excellent! Watch your end marks and commas, but there weren't to many issues. I loved this story! It was awesome when Heather dumped her drink on his girlfriend, and the ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: A New Awakening -Prologue-
Excellent prologue! One of the best I have read on here. You gave info, but just enough to keep us on our toes waiting for more. Loved it! Let me ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Afterparty
Well, it is a bit rushed, but not bad! I thoroughly enjoyed this. I love the dream! Excellent job making him wake up just at the high point. I look ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Mic Night - Chapter One
Some minor grammar issues, but it appears those have already been commented on, therefore, I will refrain. Excellent story; I love it! You really have me hooked, and I can't ...
Jun 21, 2011