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thanks friend. I'm working on thinking of a better title.

thanks friend

thanks for the review. She would've had to report her deeds eventually in order to receive her pay. And yeah, I'm not cruel enough to actually have killed him off ...

Thanks for reviewing, appreciate it. 'big box' refers to the television, and 'little box' refers to radio. I think I have an idea about how to change that line now. ...

heh, yeah. Tobys just a bit mature for his age. Thanks for the review.

hi, thanks for reviewing. I wasn't sure how to end this, and agree it's not really the strongest possible. If you have any ideas, do please tell me.

14 years" alludes to (managed to submit that too early.) He's angry because he feels his mother has become a "statistic" and has been forgotten along with the faces and ...

hi, thanks for reviewing. No, I didn't get the idea of this story from the quote, actually. The narrator in short, lost his mother on 9/11/01; that's what the "

Thanks for the review. To understand the situation better, you'd have to read the other chapters first, unless you want me to recap in the description for people just jumping ...

hi, thanks for the review again. It does go Prologue -> Chapter One -> Chapter Two -> then this part, Chapter three. I took chapter one offline for a bit ...

thanks. I found this and the few chapters afterwards agonizingly tough to write, actually. I knew where I was headed but didn't know how to get there, if you get ...

its ok. i hope you upload something so i can learn how to write better.

except the pov character has the mind of a ten year old so i purposely didnt use high level vocab, but whatever

well, that hurts. dont know what to say except sorry you feel that way.

thanks for the review.