tigeraye

Thanks for the review friend (a month late I know x_x)

Thanks again friend. If you do end up reading more, I'd really appreciate your reviews on the later chapters, particularly seven and eight. Funny you mention the medical condition being ...

Thanks friend. I'll make the mother more responsible next time I do edits to this.

im fond of this story :)

Thanks, I'm really happy you liked it. I love the characters too, it makes it a ton of fun to write these stories. I didn't catch the Selene thing, no, ...

Thanks friend, and welcome. I wrote this in a few hours, so sorry it's not the most fleshed out story, haha. I'll try to describe the world of Sanguinem in ...

Thanks friend

Thanks again, friend. The first couple of chapters after the prologue I personally feell are the weakest, so I definitely want to improve them anyway I can, hahaha.

thanks friend.

thanks friend.

ah, I didnt see the notification for this. Thanks as always.

Thanks for all the reviews friend, its greatly appreciated. In regards to Toby's father: yeah, it'll be a central theme going forward. In older drafts, Toby's dad was actually still ...

nah, I'm not offended! I'll be honest, I don't read as much fiction as I should to know what's acceptable and what's not acceptable, so you've helped me a ton, ...

Thanks again, friend. Hope my lack of professionalism didn't bother you too much x_x Annie met Toby again in chapter two by the way.

thanks for the help friend, I made some changes. Will keep the thing about conjunctions in mind x_x