tigeraye

Thanks again, I made some changes based on what you said. Your careful critiques make me want to make sure the next chapters are extra polished x_x

heheh ok. I'll review that part, but give me time to read the rest first so I know what it's about.

heheh. You don't have to sugarcoat it for me, I appreciate honesty :p I honestly don't like it very much myself.

thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it a bunch :p Well isn't this a sad yet interesting chapter! One thing I find a little confusing (and there's a good chance I ...

thanks for the criticism, it's appreciated. Sorry you didn't enjoy it too much.

thanks for reviewing. Sorry you didn't like it.

thanks friend. I'll try to clarify Bailey's grandmother's condition, it will be brought up again. I just needed a reason for Bailey not to sit next to Toby, and in ...

oh, heheh. Yeah I tend to gloss over the genre. This is a cool story, keep going at it.

you almost made me feel nice, but then i looked at your profile and saw you giving the same review to everyone. mean :(

This is terrible x_x

yeah, np

hm, not sure I know, but I'll read over it to find out, that'll be bugging me now to know what you mean. Thanks for reading!!

thanks for reading, friend. I dunno, kind of like the ending as is.

Thanks friend

Thanks friend. I'll make some changes to the "senses" portion in a bit.