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Re: Black Heart
I like the poem alot and I think the whole break up message is cery clear. However, the rhyme scheme varies in some places, and in my opinion would be ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Twisting Paths: Preface [Edited]
I really enjoyed it. The beginning grasped me quickly, and the length really didn't matter, I jsut wanted to read it. The coolest thing that I like about it was ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: He played his guitar without ever seeing the strings
The picture mentally was really great and reflected the kind of inner joy happiness. Having the scene by the ocean and even adding cigarettes and bud light made it seem ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: The mourning Moon.
I felt like the poem started out really great. It caught my attention and the title really stood out and made me think about what it could possibly be about, ...
Dec 2, 2008
