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Thank you and I will try to!

Thank you! Your comment really made my day!

This was not my opinion of the Internet. The only reason I used that topic was because it gave a sense of irony to the overall satire. The "nut job" ...

Thank you for your very original review. I don't think we should get rid of the Internet; that was my topic because it's someone saying we should but transmitting his ...

Thanks for your review. Yes, the whole purpose of this was to be sarcastic and ironic. Those typos were mistakes that I didn't catch; next time, I'll go through my ...

Oh haha yeah I get what you mean.

Thank you for your review. I actually think we should keep the Internet; I just used the topic because it was ironic that someone trying to get rid of the ...

Thank you! I tried to keep a darker mood in place, considering the meaning of the poem.

Thank you!

This is a beautiful poem. I like the way you organized the stanzas; they add a new effect to the poem. Although it's somewhat short, the message was portrayed in ...

This is a great poem! The story within it is told wonderfully in a melancholy way. The descriptions spin a web of emotions that only poetry can portray. You have ...