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Hi Liberty! I like how this poem is short and effective. I would have liked it to flow a little more but overall you made your point clear!

Overall, I enjoyed reading your poem! Many parts were easy to visualize, but as I began to reread it I got confused about the perspective from which it is written. ...

I will definitely keep writing! I didn't realize that writing would be something I would enjoy this much. Thank you for your kind words and encouragement!

I see where you are coming from with that one line. I played around with it and could not decide how to state it more clearly, so I just went ...

Thank you for your encouragement and I am going to be diving deeply into the punctuation pool!

Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate the time you took to do it. I will begin learning about punctuation in poetry soon. After that we will explore ...