thewonderworldofnight

that was good in a depressing way. I didn't read 1984 yet, but it must be good to get this sort of writing! I don't have any critiques as of ...

I'm so happy! I'm reading this book this year in English class, so it's good to know it won't be a drag! Thanks guys! ~Deoris

It's really funny! Did this come to you out of a dream? It seems to move along in that sort of irregular sequence...and the mystical people added to that as ...

okay...i honestly really liked that, and i'm often not the one to be so into romance writing...now i have to start from the beginning and see what happened before the ...

yeah it's a fanfic of Marion Zimmer Bradley's The Fall of Atlantis. It's not a whole, just a piece... thanks for the critique! this has been up for quite a ...

NOOOOO!!! SNAPE!!! DUMBLEDORE!!! Like others said before me, it's beautiful in a sad way... :cry:

The thing is, Ron told Rosie to beat Scorpius (sorry!) in every test and such, so I figured he would basically hint that she shouldn't be friends with him... Anyways, ...

[spoiler]Lupin would never be with Lily! He's too good for her! It's like Kel said, Rowling shows no good qualities in James, he's portrayed as arrogant and a bully...Lily should ...

[spoiler] I think Percy should have died instead of Fred. A last redeeming action to help save his family from the evil Death Eaters. It would have suited the pompous ...

Yeah...this is just what I wrote during a class, so it's not even a whole chapter... I'm really hating how I depict Rosie though...I'll post another draft pretty soon (or ...

[spoiler]Yeah, I know, the whole not saying who Victoire's parents are bugged me so much!!! I never thought about the possibility of her parents being Bill and Fleur, but that ...

[spoiler]THEN STOP DOING THEM!!! i'm such a hypocrite...[/spoiler] ~Deoris

[spoiler]He was only in it for glory, not for love of the wizarding world!!! That's why he pushed everyone who wanted to help him away-- to have the glory for ...

[spoiler]The only reason Harry even lived through the books is because of Voldemort's million mistakes! He's not brave-- he's stupid and he should have died! That would've made me very ...

[spoiler]Yeah, but no one could really be Lily! POOR SNAPE I LOVE YOU!!![/spoiler] I don't get it; why does practically no one love Snape? He's awesome! Sooo much better than ...