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Re: "I wouldn't want you"
Hi! First of all, this person sounds horrible! I'm sorry you had to deal with them. Secondly, I can tell this poem was used as a way to vent and ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: Death Comes as the End
Hi there! First of all, I just want to say that I loved this poem! It's brilliant! The last stanza, in particular, reminds me of some of my favourite classic ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: Within my dreams
Hi! This poem is brilliant! I love the commentary on grief. It's so powerful and true to life. I enjoyed the absence of rhyme, it's very refreshing to read as ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: Maladroit.
Hi! This really is a great poem. It's very unique! Just a few things: The last line of the second stanza, 'and sudden[ly] let it go.' The last line of ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: The Dead Can't Dance With The Living
This is a really great poem wow! I love the commentary on grief (it's always been one of my favourite themes) Great use of poetic devices too! I can see ...
Nov 16, 2017
