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thetwofridas

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: "I wouldn't want you"

    Hi! First of all, this person sounds horrible! I'm sorry you had to deal with them. Secondly, I can tell this poem was used as a way to vent and ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Death Comes as the End

    Hi there! First of all, I just want to say that I loved this poem! It's brilliant! The last stanza, in particular, reminds me of some of my favourite classic ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Within my dreams

    Hi! This poem is brilliant! I love the commentary on grief. It's so powerful and true to life. I enjoyed the absence of rhyme, it's very refreshing to read as ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Maladroit.

    Hi! This really is a great poem. It's very unique! Just a few things: The last line of the second stanza, 'and sudden[ly] let it go.' The last line of ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Dead Can't Dance With The Living

    This is a really great poem wow! I love the commentary on grief (it's always been one of my favourite themes) Great use of poetic devices too! I can see ...

    Nov 16, 2017


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