thestorygirl

This is beautiful. Can you tell me if I get this right? So she is a musician with a harp and shes lonely. Maybe I'm wrong and stupid and idiotic ...

Love it!!!!!! Orion sounds like a familiar name for some reason. I dont know Im just a very odd child. It took me like thirty seconds to read this. It's ...

EagleFeather is adorable. Startail is cute Falconwing is fuzzy. You are a good writer. I will folllow you. A lot. Dont worry im just naturally odd. Peculiar. funky. mental. insane. ...

Pretty and I liked it a lot. If your twelve what would you be able to when your 13? 14? 15? 16? 17 [like me im old and worn out ...

I really like this. In a weird way I thought I saw steam coming off the words when I read this, It's really good and real. There's something about this ...

I like it and it sounds a little like me with the clique girls in my school. Except I have lashed out and reduced them to suddering, evil, goose-pulp. that ...

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! sorry for the text thingy there I couldnt help myself. This is something that I actually have going on inside my had at certain times, no I am not ...

I like it A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!! The new peice was very detailed. I could almost taste what she was going to say. Literally this poem was delicious. I have wierd word ...

This was a very good poem. It was beautifully written and seemed to have a meaning that I couldn't quite get. But it was really really really really really good ...

This is a really good and very funny actually. Did this really happen? If it did i might have to lauph. there werent a lot of errors. actually there werent ...

Not that bad honestly. I myself am a big warriors fan. It's very intrueging. write more please there isnt much else to say. this was an amazing fanfiction. not many ...

Hi Bladesmith. that was really good and captured my intrest. you should try to use the tab button, but if your tab thing is all funky with this website (like ...

It took me a while to catch on but it definetly was well written. I like how different she is and how well decripted he is. There were few grammatical ...

It's really funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But while I was rolling on the ground lauphing and reading(by the way not a good combination) I read when SM came it sort of mad the ...

It wasa overall very good plot with few grammatical errors that where they were did not take away from the plot. the grammatical errors were with puncuation mostly. add more ...