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Re: Demon Hunter- The Beginning
I liked the cliffhanger at the end. I agree that you should have spaced out the dialouge more. Other than that I didn't see anything wrong with it. I can't ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: "Don't look at me"
This was a very good story. I don't see how they could have suspended you for it except maybe for using the word "bitch." Other than that, nice. Keep up ...
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Goddess Fallen
Wow! Very discrptive. Nice work. Jaw-dropping. Hopefully the next will be just as good.
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Disney's Sleeping Beauty
Very good work. Nice and gory. The only mistakes I saw were the ones already pointed out.
Aug 30, 2008