thelostone

Hello! Overall, I think this is a very nice piece. It's informative without giving too much away and keeps the reader hungry and eager for the next chapter. However, I ...

Hello! I would just like to say that this is very nice. I love how you took a lightweight familiar song and put it to a heavy serious topic. People ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I loved how you made the characters come to life. My favorite line was probably in the beginning when you wrote, "his brown eyes lit ...

This is pretty good. I like how a lot of people can relate to this. It's very easy to connect with and it flows very well.