thehotinpsychotic

If you don't mind, you can do whatever you want, thanks

If you don't mind, you can do whatever you want, thanks

If you don't mind, you can do whatever you want, thanks

If you don't mind, you can do whatever you want, thanks

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! So, this was pretty good. A very interesting and melancholy idea. My favorite part was probably when it was revealed who Allison was. Now, my ...

Fine, but just know that if you go around saying stuff like "It's called understanding dialogue..." you're going to piss people off.

It's called writing a decent plot, which is clear that didn't happen

Thanks!

I'm never looking to get this published (it's actually a fanfiction). Thanks for your critique, though.

Thanks!

Thanks!

Wow that's such a good compliment thanks so much

Thanks! I'll have to explain why Alex has the camera later.

Thanks for the review! And yeah, some people might find the "all of that shit" unnecessary, but Sara's the kind of girl that swears a lot. I'll have to tell ...

That's fine. And thanks for the review!