thegoldenbird

Pretty cool story. Gripping as it advances. Bone-chilling as it climaxes. I like the entire flow and the writing style. The plot, of course, is great too. Keep writing! P.S: ...

This was a nice composition. To me it felt a little less "literary" type and more of the "pouring out the feelings" type. I hope this helped you get over ...

Thank you for the review. This poem was my first one with a deep thought and was written when I was 14. This is special to me and hence I ...

I have made the necessary changes. Hope you like the poem better now!

I have made the necessary changes. Hope you like it better now! Please reply and let me know if the mistakes have been rectified. Thank you!

Thank you for the review. You definitely got the feeling I tried to portray. Also, this isn't a completely non-rhyming poem. If you notice, there is a rhyme scheme of ...

Thank you for your appreciation and for the information about the figure of speech. Will surely keep that in mind.

Thank you; will surely work on that

Thank you for your appreciation

Thank you for your appreciation

Thank you for your appreciation

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I would surely make the above mentioned changes, except the nitpick. It is meant to be that way. The night did not give the ...

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I would surely make the above mentioned changes, except the nitpick. It is meant to be that way. The night did not give the ...