thecolorofthesky

Hey there! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you brought up this point! It isn't one way or another in my eyes, although this is a slightly a biased piece. ...

Thank you so much for your review! My poem seemed long and choppy when I posted it. I was stuck and in need of revisions. You helped me out! I've ...

Thank you lovely! Glad you enjoyed it! It helped me see the possibilities there are when you feel stuck on a poem. It also revealed the many different ways to ...

Of course! Let me know if you'd like help or sources.

Any time!

Hi there! Thank you for the comment! I can completely understand if you don't enjoy it. My belief is that art is subjective, but successful art makes someone feel, think ...

Hi there! I'd like to thank you for the review! I edited the piece with all the critiques. I'm excited over the reaction to this! Thank you so much! Glad ...

Thank you so much! I'm really touched that it got such a good response. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was one of those poems that brews in your mind ...

Thank you! I feel like it worked out very well technique wise while creating a beautiful story at the same time. I'm glad you enjoyed!

No, no! I just felt I needed to clarify and that falls on me as the writer. As I said, it was more clear when presented in person.

Hi there! Thank you for the review. I have a little clarification I posted above if you don't mind reading.

Hi there! Thank you for the review. I have a little clarification I posted above if you don't mind reading.

Hi there! Thank you for the review. I have a little clarification I posted above if you don't mind reading.

Hi there! Thank you for the review. I have a little clarification I posted above if you don't mind reading.

Hi there! It's thecolorofthesky. I would like to write a little bit about my piece. This is my first poem I wrote by my own free will. When I wrote ...