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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Insanity

    thats really good !!! Love the word choices you made!! Keep up the good work :)

    May 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My life

    Oky so first I think you mean "to be an accepted part OF society" not " to be an accepteod part f society". Overall this oz pretty good but you ...

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: What Lies Beneath

    Love this!! You use great imagery!!I can just picture it :)

    Apr 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: Inspired by a Lava Lamp

    Haha love the title and this is really good :) I love hoe I can picture it in my head :) great job :)

    Apr 29, 2014


I have been impressed with the urgency of doing. Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Being willing is not enough; we must do.
— Leonardo da Vinci