thebrightestfell

Thanks so much for the review! And also thank you for mentioning the quotation marks because I was unsure if I wanted them or not (I mean I really didn't ...

First off thank you for the pointers on the grammar and actually I have sat wondering about that one sentence (the one with loose change) on whether it was too ...

Yes haha I did mean to say "my ratty black case" and you read into the story correctly which gives me hope. :) Obviously it has been pointed out that ...

Thank you for your review and I will definitely get on those grammar changes and adding commas and what not! As for the last bit about her scars being confusing ...

I'm sorry you're going through rough weeks :/ but I do honestly look forward to more of your stuff, Wey. Lovely poem (I'm going to keep mentioning that as often ...

Thanks so much Weymouth! I'm proud that you found it beautiful and yes it is about self-harm. As for explanations and to sum up your confusion with the last stanza ...

Thank you for your pointers and for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it and yeah, emotions. XD I will try and see if I can rephrase those lines to ...

Despite the fact that you are not sure of what you're conveying, I genuinely adored this story. It was well-written, easy to read and to follow along with, and even ...

Thanks again for reviewing, Hannah. I might have to think about the first part of your review in relation to the "you" and the separation. Perhaps if I had stanzas, ...

Thank you dogsrule5 for taking the time to review! :) As for stanzas, yes I completely understand your feelings. I actually did have this broken up into tiny stanzas but ...

Thanks Imaginator! And yes I suppose making things longer is something I'll have to think about as a review on another one of my works runs along those lines. I ...

Thank you for your review and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Also I thank you for the idea about italicizing as I'll definitely have to look into that since I ...

Thanks so much Hannah for your review. I'm also extremely grateful that it was long and well-thought out! :) I completely agree with your friend and have been looking for ...

Thank you Bitter! I'm glad you enjoyed it and felt the message was conveyed properly. :)