thebrightestfell

Okay then. Here we go. Nitpickies first, as per usual. I only have, like three, actually and it is preference punctuation and slight alteration of word choices. 1.) I would ...

Yeah....wow. I absolutely adore this piece of poetry. The darkness and the broiling emotion chaotically thrown across the entirety of the poem is itself a perfect, beautiful illustration of self-harm ...

I really, really like this but also didn't in a strange way. Not because of your writing but because I believe I understand what you're trying to say. This will ...

Hi! So I'd like to start by saying how interesting I found this little short story. I thought it was simplistic yet earnest if that makes sense. Now for the ...

Okay so props to you first off for writing something so intricate and leveled and circus-y. Because the circus, the freak show, is probably one of the most amazing/interesting things ...

I've actually only encountered a few villanelle and that was in certain Literature classes, so frankly I'm a little unsure of the exact technical parts of it and if I ...

Hey there. First off, loved the poem and the way you described the feelings. They are written as both recognizable to those who know them and have experienced them but ...