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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Why Do I Love Him ? ; Part 1

    Hi Rhea, I'll be reviewing your work. The first thing that I noticed is how you used a semi-colon in place for a colon. The semicolon (;) has only one ...

    Aug 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Why Do I Love Him ?

    Am I correct in assuming that this is a work in progress? Anyway, on with the review, which may or may not be that helpful. I think you'll appeal to ...

    Aug 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love Doesn't Have Age Limits -Part 1-

    Hi, I'm thearisen, and I'm going to be reviewing this piece of writing. This is the first review that I've made on this website, and I'm not as much of ...

    Aug 3, 2013


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