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yes, yes, i daresay i very much enjoyed this piece. It somehow took me until the second read-through to understand the meaning, but its very evident now. You have several ...

yeah man really powerful writing. I dig your style - which is clearly your own style, so i applaud you there. I dont think the punctuation has taken away anything, ...

i agreed with some of the posts above. it was a very difficult poem to read. I'm not sure if it was becuase of the punctuation or lack of "doing" ...

ahh my friend adriangarcia you missed the point, you captured the beauty and mistook it for rubbage. How many frost poems are like this, or any of the great poets, ...

I generally dislike punctuation alot however i feel as though this poem could benefit alot from it. An example is here Never know whats Around the bend Never know what ...

Haha, yeah i agree with the two posts above me. Its pretty much not an attempt. But try breaking it up into line breaks and add more depth to it ...

Wonderful poem, i'm having trouble finding the meaning but in my opinion the words are more than meaning here. The trees stripped bare by winter’s hands Rip the skies and ...

Its a really solid poem, you dont have any sentences that really take down the whole piece. No weak parts which is excellent to see. It really reminds me of ...