the_red_gem

I liked this, paticularly the ending. A couple of things though... 1) Bob was right about the rhythm 2) Adding a 'that' to the last line makes it sound better ...

Your blog commanded me to read your story and I'm glad it did. Well done to you. I paticularly like the bit "Going to Hell for all of Eternity was ...

I haven't read All American Girl yet but i recommend Princess Diaries, The Guy Next Door, The Mediator and Victoria+The Rogue If you havent read any of them yet(girls) you ...

Hmmmm.....Sounds cool. The seriousness lacked in some places only. The name should be like "the cutter of wood" or "The heavy axe" or maybe even ".....". Hang on a minute ...