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The concept is very interesting although I feel that the end of poem was very random. "I am a fallen angel and so I dance" to be exact. Your travelling ...

Yes, reading about natural wonders is a very interesting thing. I think you did pretty well with this. Although, my only concern is that it didn't flow very well. The ...

From what I see on YWS is that most poets have a difficult time not only rhyming but also having every line flow to the next. Although, yours is an ...

Yes, this is an interesting story. Although I don't yet see how this girl is schizophrenic. She actually seems pretty normal and calm to me for a schizo. And she ...

This is very well-written. Like many, I could feel the pain you were trying to interpret. Although it was more of a dull pain since "unfolding this truth" was shorter ...