the-candyman

i've also seen this storyline many times but i've never seen it in final fantasy :smt044

hey zman great job. are they at the same planet as in timeas story :smt044

hey great job timea. stories coming along greatly :smt044

this chapter was a little slow but your're still doing great :smt044

great job. I like the suspense between chapters. :smt044

i like the story but know im really confused :smt044 I think theres four storylines and i cant follow them all

I dont like slow stories but this isn't one of them. I cant wait to read the rest. great story. p.s. i know zat what means

great story line. I cant wait to read it. :smt044

great story i think the other people covered all the proof reading so yeah can't wait to read the rest

sounds like a great story cant wait to read it