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  • Poetry » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: Patrochilies

    Thank you so much, and will definitely take this into account. I'm also flattered you did the research, and yes, the shift from second to third perspective was deliberate. It ...

    Jun 15
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: don't light a wet cigarette - chapter 1

    thank you so much :3

    Jun 4
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: DEER EYES chapter 1

    Hi, @noridori, thanks for the review I really appreciated it, fall is also my favourite season so....Also, it's Edinburgh, so usually, unless it's summer or strong winter's it's probably going ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: DEER EYES chapter 1

    Hi, Tikaya. I've just seen your message. I understand what you mean about the ''lanky'' windows, and the dreamy-like tone and all your points which is something I'm taking in ...

    May 29
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: DEER EYES chapter 1

    Thank you for the review, I'd been dying to know how readers felt. Have a lovely day/night too!

    May 27
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Is Nihilism a product of comfort rather than suffering?

    True, and oop, that earned you a follow!

    May 27
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Diamond Eyes

    Deftones is the rock-metal band and they have an album called Diamond Eyes..don't worry about it

    May 26
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Diamond Eyes

    this a Deftones album reference? And I'm sorry, this is so romantic like: "Your diamond eyes.. with the mix of an afternoon sky, Your smile.. Warms up a cold room ...

    May 26
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: don't light a wet cigarette - chapter 1

    Oh, you're so sweet! Leave as is, dw about it

    May 25
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: House in Nebraska

    absolutely!

    May 23
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Just because you fit in doesn't mean you belong

    I'm so sorry, that must be horrible! I hope you and your family are alright. I'm good and thriving thanks! Also, cute pfp.

    May 22
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Prongsfoot fanfic

    Hi, thanks so much for the review. I definitely should next time use songs from around that timeline. And really should overall ground it there, I personally just found it ...

    May 12
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Prongsfoot fanfic

    thanks a lot!

    May 12
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: diagnosis

    Hi, your poem has such a unique writing style which I enjoyed although did find a bit confusing. Although the message became quite clear during the end and during the ...

    May 11
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Wednesday in My Life

    %u2764%uFE0F

    May 8


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