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quite a good poem i'de say, the rhyme scheme seemed to work quite well. the problem i had was the length of the poem, it really was too long, but ...

wow, whoever this girl or woman is, she really is down in the dumps haha. i thought the armor begining to crack part was actually quite good, it shows that ...

different, sounds like one of mine when i first started writing poetry. would i be right in guessing that this poem took you a short space of time to write. ...

really good book that one. can't say i cried at all but i did enjoy it. i'm not a fast reader so it probably took me more than twice what ...

nice poem. i liked the imagery in there. and your rhyme shceme was quite good too. very good write. like i said, the imagery was exellent and i could see ...

the first thing i noticed was the images and pictures that sub-concieously came into my head, i was very impressed. the cave seemed to be like a tamed beast in ...

this is a great poem from what seems to be a great writer. this is truly amazing. every line is perfect, every sylable, every rhyme. not heard a poem this ...

this is an exellent poem, especially for your first. I'll start with the not so good: first of all, the rhyming was, at some points a little bit like you ...

a decent poem, i think maybe working on your use of sylables could be your next task if thats the type of poetry this is. the title says it all ...