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Re: Silence
This has such vivid imagery! I really enjoyed how you captured that scene of feeling so many things, but all that comes out is silence. “In the peripheral pulse of ...
Feb 25, 2026 -
Re: The City with Half-Baked Buildings.
This seems like such an intense and consuming sort of love, and you've really poured your heart into it (so it seems). It seems especially vulnerable, and I like how ...
Feb 21, 2026 -
Re: ȶɦɛ Щօʀʟɖ Ɨֆ Ɨռ Ֆɦǟʍɮʟɛֆ
Hi Cats! It's been a while. I like the voice you've used in this poem, like it's almost conversational but not quite with the slight rhythm that it has. It's ...
Feb 21, 2026 -
Re: Evelyn: Bone Boy
Hi! I'll be reviewing this work today! First off, I really like the world-building aspect of this! The faeries have the kids wrapped around their fingers, and I wouldn't have ...
Aug 30, 2025 -
Re: Threads Of Destiny, Echoes Of The Pendant Book One-A Guardian's Spirit Chapter One-Twelve
Hi! First off, I really liked the premise of this story. A dark horse, sent out to take down another enemy tribe, but making a real, human connection there instead, ...
Jul 28, 2025