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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silence

    This has such vivid imagery! I really enjoyed how you captured that scene of feeling so many things, but all that comes out is silence. “In the peripheral pulse of ...

    Feb 25
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Narrative Re: The City with Half-Baked Buildings.

    This seems like such an intense and consuming sort of love, and you've really poured your heart into it (so it seems). It seems especially vulnerable, and I like how ...

    Feb 21
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: ȶɦɛ Щօʀʟɖ Ɨֆ Ɨռ Ֆɦǟʍɮʟɛֆ

    Hi Cats! It's been a while. I like the voice you've used in this poem, like it's almost conversational but not quite with the slight rhythm that it has. It's ...

    Feb 21
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Evelyn: Bone Boy

    Hi! I'll be reviewing this work today! First off, I really like the world-building aspect of this! The faeries have the kids wrapped around their fingers, and I wouldn't have ...

    Aug 30, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Threads Of Destiny, Echoes Of The Pendant Book One-A Guardian's Spirit Chapter One-Twelve

    Hi! First off, I really liked the premise of this story. A dark horse, sent out to take down another enemy tribe, but making a real, human connection there instead, ...

    Jul 28, 2025


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians