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Really great! I found it a bit confusing but overall really good. I wish you would have put "Quotation marks in it" Maybe use less he and she and put ...

I really like it. Is this your prologue? There are a few capitalization mistakes and could use more length. You could put maybe the names of the characters but I ...

thxs

yes but i wanted to do a take on it. I didn't want her to be a son of mars (ares) and the person that she is modeled after said ...

well if you have read the hoo books frank can shape shift and he is a son of mars (ares)

hey @Artemis28 I wanted to answer a few of your questions. I also love the pjo books by the way. Well Clara has been at camp since she was 6 ...

thanks for clearing it up :)

this "Waffle" seems amazing. I love how you put the descriptions of dark-chocolate Hershey brown hair. My one friend calls him self waffle so that what first got me to ...

hey I'm going to answer a few of the questions you had above. The "clans" as you put it are Greek Gods and the characters are demigods (half mortals half ...