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It seems like it could go on forever. Not that that's a bad thing. Who knows? Maybe in some cases, eternal recurrence could be a good thing. I like the ...

This work is sad but true. This is an example of what the world has become and is becoming. Nice work. It got to me and not much does. You ...

Are you always egotistical or is this your first time? Anyways, it has nice words, a bit wierd though. Your work is kind of selfish a bit. I hope you ...

I like a type of futuristic type of story. But I think I heard that plot before...animals unable to live outside of a host. Oh well. It was a good ...

I liked your detail and some humor. But, and yes, there is always a but, you may have used too much detail. The common readers do not want to spend ...

It is nice, yet depressing, but thats okay because I don't show much emotion. Meloncholy! Anyways, it is pretty good, however, you may want to check the grammer. One sentince ...

I am usually not one for poetry, which it seems this is some, but it is okay for a piece. You may want to sum it up however. For a ...