talkingbird

This is REALLY good. It's like, actually a really beautiful poem. My only thing is that there are a few vague antecedents, and I mean the reader will get it, ...

All I have to say is that I love this. So much. ahhh. ok. I might come back later to give you feedback but right now I just see what ...

I really like this, it sounds really professional... like very some-poet-I-can't-remember-the-name-of-lol-sorry-esque. Very few people can make the rhyming thing work, so good job! I actually didn't e

This is really good! I especially liked this part: An eye within a mind that doesn’t watch I don't know... That line is just so accurate i guess! My only ...

Wow, this was really interesting and good! I don't really have many critiques, and I don't want to repeat what others above have said. The only thing though... "We borne ...

Wow... like... this is REALLY good. These were y favorite parts: I heard that insanity is more of a repetition than anything else. Continuing actions past the used by date ...

Wow, I like the length. I think this is so real. I admit, I thought it was going to be really angsty and cliched, but it's not. It's short and ...

This is well written, it has a very good flow and rhythm! While you captured a lot of the idea of being lost in society's ideals and wanting so badly ...

Wow... That was really amazing. I liked how you talked more about the feeling than the routines and rituals that come with OCD. I could totally relate, seeing as I ...

The thing I really like about this was the stylistic choices. Like how in the beginning it gives a feeling of being trapped and there's a period at the end ...

Ok, I'm not going to pick at it right now (I might come back later but like, It's 4 am and I'm lazy :P) BUT I really liked this. At ...

I don't really know how to edit this in any way, but I think sometimes the flow is a little disrupted... sorry for being unhelpful right there... BUT I actually ...

It was a little choppy, there wasn't a constant rhythm, which is what makes it easy to read. It was emotional, but I think if you do anything on this ...

I liked it, I thought it was really different and creative. But I thought the rhythm was really off. Like some lines would have a definite one and then I'd ...

OK, I usually dislike rhyming poems but I LOVED this. I don't really have a lot to tear up besides that I think instead of 'not a drop to drink ...