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Re: To be a Star (18+)
That was definitely a different kind of story than I usually read. And it was wonderful! There were a few things that confused me though. 1. I don't understand why ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: My Aborted Child (Rewritten)
Wow! (I find myself starting most reviews with "wow", so don't be offended if you find others of mine with "wow" c:) This story was truly heartbreaking. Even though I'm ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: A Regret Too Late
I really love stories about lives cut short, and this one I especially loved. I don't see anywhere you can make a correction, really. Except, of course, if you decide ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: Joining the Stars
Wow. I honestly can't describe how hard this hit me. Before I begin, I have to say I agree with the others- there's some strange word choice that makes this ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: Soldier On
Hey! I don't know why I torture myself with sad stories but I do. And this story made me sappy. Sad/happy ;) I love how it gets sadder and more ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: The Girl in the Cardinal Dress
Wow. Just... wow. This was so mysterious- I was afraid this would turn into a horror, with the man seeing his soul mate die. I can't describe my sigh of ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: The Fog
First off, I have to say I am so sorry for your loss. Your sister sounds like a beautiful girl, and I'm sure she's proud of you. Everyone else has ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Being "That Kid": How NOT to be a Massive D-Bag
Hahahahahaha oh my god, I absolutely adored this. It doesn't apply specifically to the douchebags in my school, but it was very clear. I doubt that anyone could mistake this ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Counting Questions
Wow. I absolutely love this piece- it perfectly captures the feelings and hurt of someone whose feelings and thoughts have been forcibly taken and read. I adored your word choice. ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Timba and James
Oh my goodness. I don't even know where to begin. At first, I was wary of the story. For some reason, the title made me think of a Lion King ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Sleeping Beauty
I absolutely loved it. I usually detest rhyming in poems that aren't children's poems, but adore it when used choppily. And it worked so well for this poem! The topic ...
Jul 13, 2013
