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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: To be a Star (18+)

    That was definitely a different kind of story than I usually read. And it was wonderful! There were a few things that confused me though. 1. I don't understand why ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: My Aborted Child (Rewritten)

    Wow! (I find myself starting most reviews with "wow", so don't be offended if you find others of mine with "wow" c:) This story was truly heartbreaking. Even though I'm ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: A Regret Too Late

    I really love stories about lives cut short, and this one I especially loved. I don't see anywhere you can make a correction, really. Except, of course, if you decide ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Joining the Stars

    Wow. I honestly can't describe how hard this hit me. Before I begin, I have to say I agree with the others- there's some strange word choice that makes this ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Soldier On

    Hey! I don't know why I torture myself with sad stories but I do. And this story made me sappy. Sad/happy ;) I love how it gets sadder and more ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Girl in the Cardinal Dress

    Wow. Just... wow. This was so mysterious- I was afraid this would turn into a horror, with the man seeing his soul mate die. I can't describe my sigh of ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Fog

    First off, I have to say I am so sorry for your loss. Your sister sounds like a beautiful girl, and I'm sure she's proud of you. Everyone else has ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Satire Re: Being "That Kid": How NOT to be a Massive D-Bag

    Hahahahahaha oh my god, I absolutely adored this. It doesn't apply specifically to the douchebags in my school, but it was very clear. I doubt that anyone could mistake this ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Counting Questions

    Wow. I absolutely love this piece- it perfectly captures the feelings and hurt of someone whose feelings and thoughts have been forcibly taken and read. I adored your word choice. ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Timba and James

    Oh my goodness. I don't even know where to begin. At first, I was wary of the story. For some reason, the title made me think of a Lion King ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sleeping Beauty

    I absolutely loved it. I usually detest rhyming in poems that aren't children's poems, but adore it when used choppily. And it worked so well for this poem! The topic ...

    Jul 13, 2013


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