syndeton

This is very short, so maybe it could benefit from multiple chapters merging or this one being fleshed out more. It seems to me as if Nicole is resentful towards ...

I like the brooding and Count Lachlan’s characterisation, but it seems like it ends quite abruptly. Maybe it could do with some more suspense building regarding Sabina’s arrival? Also I ...

Very interesting and well written exploration of this character through her eyes. Focusing on one aspect of her physical appearance to reveal her soul works well, and I love how ...