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Re: Rose Petals
This is an adorable poem! I love the imagery. For example, the water described as "clear blue" and "reflecting deep from the pond" suggests your theme of clarity and peace. ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Every Single Tear is a Fragment
Hello there! I absolutely love the concept of this, well done! The repetition that joins the sentences, allows this poem to flow in an almost lyrical way which is really ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Our Little Time Together
Hi! First of all, wow! The journey this poem takes the reader on is certainly a tumultuous but relatable one! The structure is great. The anaphora in the the repetition ...
Mar 26, 2016
