sylviaelioness

Wow. Thanks for the comments. I will certainly keep them in mind as I go through, editing it. Thank you so much for the time you took to review ti ...

Thank you for the great advice. I have been told before that I don't break my writing into enough paragraph, so I really need to start working on that. I ...

Thanks so much for the comments! I will skim through, and break it up into more paragraphs. I really appreciate the time you took to read and comment! Thank you! ...

You said it all... great review. I have nothing else to add.

wow! Thanks for the long, descriptive review! I really appreciate the time you spent to read the comment. :) I will go through the prologue and see what I can ...

Thanks fpr reviewing. I would like to keep the Prologue as the prologue because 1) its too short to be a chapter and 2) I don't continue from this point ...

I really liked that. The pressures of other people can really be irritating or stressful. Sometimes, we need to just ignore them, spread our own wings and fly. Your character ...