sweetie_pie94

Hya!:) I'm gonna help you here. I realized that your new. I'm too at the time. One thing I know about poems is that you need to capitalize each line. ...

Hiya! I'm gonna help you here. I see one problem and I have one suggestion. One thing I know about poems is that your supposed to capitalize at the beginning ...

Hiya! I'm gonna help you here today. Honestly, I love your poem. It is so extraordinary. I've never heard a poem about such a thing. But people say 'The Mountain ...

Hey Fox! I really like this story! It's breath taking. Your so good at writing. I wish I have your skills. I was not expecting the end. Which that is ...

Hiya there!!!!!!!!! I love this poem! It's so adorable! At that age it was pretty good. Since, you were writing then, I can already see your master pieces being quoted ...

Hiya there! I'm gonna help ya today! I looked into your eyes, And the world seemed to swirl, The beauty in them was immense, And they appeared so intense. In ...

I have two things to tell you to improve this poem.:) I'm here to help. One of things I know about poems is that your supposed to capitalize each new ...

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