swaysway

Not too bad, I do have a bit of a pet peeve with one thing. In the opening sentence, you quoted Nicole as being born without parents: Once, there was ...

She could hear a faint beeping noise that sounded like it was whispering to her from the kitchen. The beeping got louder as she past her father’s open bedroom door. ...

I'm not all that sure how I feel about this. It felt a little "school child," to me. As was previously mentioned, it was quite repetitive, and I found myself ...

Discrimination. Why can’t you understand that we most live hand in hand? Why is it that you hate? How does that do any good to our fate? Why must there ...

I did like this, it's pretty good, it flows well & it's nice to read. I just have a couple things - for starters, I'm not entirely sure what the ...