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Hey! Thanks for the review! I made a few changes that you pointed out. IF you want you can read it again and tell me if any further changes are ...

Thank you so much for the review! :)

Hey runawaylove! Thank you for the review! I made the changes and if you want you can read the poem again and tell me if any further changes are required ...

thanks alot for the review wordsmakemovements :) im glad you liked it !

Thank you Niraco :) im glad you enjoyed it .

thank you venonymous for your review :) I'll will keep your points in mind and the necessary changes. Oh and i tried shift enter but it doesnt seem to work, ...

haha thank you so much for that wonderful review Strange! I'm so glad you liked it :D

big booty judy! 2 broke girls fan eh? ;)

Hey Redrum! Thanks alot for the review. it was really really helpful! thank you for being so honest. I will try and make sure i don't repeat these mistakes the ...

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Thanks a lot for the pointers Inkpot! I made the change in the line :) and yes i will try and not repeat words next time :) i couldn't think ...

Thank you so much TakeThatYouFiend! I'm glad you liked my poem :D

Thanks a lot Usherthethird for your review! I will keep your points in mind and use them in my next work :) No repetition next time :)

thank you so much shinethroughthedark for your review! I'm glad you liked my poem :D

thanks a lot for the review fictional! I'm glad you liked it! and yes honored that my poem was the first one you reviewed! THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D