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“It’s just up ahead,” c alled Kate, turning her head as she trotted along. Speech tags need to be lowercased when following a comma. The turning , boiling sounds of ...

The brittle stones in the creek were moving ever so softly. The moss above the surface was turning brown as the water started to fall slow. I actually think a ...

I could reassure myself that , as amazing as she seemed to be , she was never smarter. i just inserted the commas where they should be. Even though we ...

i was a bit lenient when editing this piece because i saw that you adapted this from a poem. the punctuation was a bit out there for me, but i ...

“Oh!” the woman said, wide eyes directed at his chest. Sliding down to his shoes. i don't know if this was just the style you were aiming for but i'd ...

Temptress, he hissed, the word rolling on his tongue like liquid sugar. 'liquid sugar' ohh i like that. i only have to comment that i've never heard "rolled on the ...

It consumed my thoughts, my everything as it clouded all I knew. This sentence is confusing to say the least. It’s a grammatical jumble and so it makes it difficult ...

** just a note/warning, i'm not exactly a grade-a editor so i hope you don't quote me on any of this, but i really enjoyed your story and wanted to ...