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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: What do tears cost?

    Hi! I've just read this poem, it's good but personally for me I would refine it a bit more. The emotions, themes and ideas are there, but I just think ...

    Feb 4, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Even the wind goes...

    Hi! This a great poem, you've wrote here. I love the imagery and how deep the theme of emotion is - is it based on a real experience? However, personally ...

    Feb 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: You Should Never Wish Away a Day

    Hi! This is another beautiful poem! Stanza One is an effective opening as it shows an aspect of realatibility, as none of us should ever wish a day in our ...

    Feb 3, 2021


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