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Re: What do tears cost?
Hi! I've just read this poem, it's good but personally for me I would refine it a bit more. The emotions, themes and ideas are there, but I just think ...
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: Even the wind goes...
Hi! This a great poem, you've wrote here. I love the imagery and how deep the theme of emotion is - is it based on a real experience? However, personally ...
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: You Should Never Wish Away a Day
Hi! This is another beautiful poem! Stanza One is an effective opening as it shows an aspect of realatibility, as none of us should ever wish a day in our ...
Feb 3, 2021
