summergrl13

I agree; it is a wonderful poem and I really wouldn't change much about this except for the last line. Try something like this maybe: "and while the last note ...

Wow, you'd never think about the negatives of winning a bunch of money. It'd still obviously be fun, but I guess I see where the loneliness comes from and why ...

Nice! Just as good as the last chapter! And you managed to maintain the same topic and atmosphere, which always seems to be the hardest thing for me... I still ...

Woo! Yay Bri! I love your first story! That is awesome for your first time! I can't believe that you did that! Wow! Are you sure you want to persue ...

I love this! It is so good and so sad. It all tied in together nicely as well. You did a great job on this! I was hanging on to ...

Hmmm. Interesting. I'm a Christian myself, and I went to a Christian school for 4 years (just got out last Wednesday :P), and there were times when I wanted to ...

Awesome! I really don't need to edit this because others have already said it for me. This is really good. But I have a few questions to ask: 1. But ...

That was soooooo awesome!! OMG, I loved it! There is no scary story like that. It's sad, it's angering, it's sweet and it's scary!! The one thing is I don't ...

I like it. Is it seriously true? If it is, then I'm sorry this is happening to you. What you need to do is break up with Ned ONCE AND ...

Interesting, but it definitely needs a little work. And, YAY! I'm the first one to comment on the poem! Sorry, it's just always funto be first :D. But, anyways, it's ...

Like it, but the "She brings me tears, leaving me lacking" part is way too vague and doesn't fit at all. I don't have any suggestions to how you should ...

I liked this; it just seemed to be placed in the exact place. Very good, you know. It's also very unique; I haven't really seen any other poems or stories ...

That is so sad. I hate molesters and rapists and all of those kind of people the most! I'd never be able to put my story on here. I admire ...

I really think that this piece is fun and has lots of potential but you really need to go back and revise/ edit it. Especially with the spelling. But they ...

I loved the Harry Potter series! And since J. K. Rowling isn't going to write about Harry's children but instead she's going to try a totally new series, I completely ...