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Re: The Fall - Chapter One
I apologize if I got any of the Spanish wrong, I used google translate since I myself know minimal Spanish.
Mar 20, 2023 - Re: The Fall - Chapter One Mar 20, 2023
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Re: Prologue
Yeah, this chapter was pretty short just because I needed to get some information out before I started with the plot, but other chapters will be much longer. Thanks for ...
Feb 18, 2023 -
Re: Prologue
Thanks so much for the review! I always love hearing what people think of my dialogue because it is not really my strong suit. Also, Valeria and Nathaniel were not ...
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Re: Monsters
*I am*, I have no clue where all the random characters came from, apologies.
Jan 12, 2023 -
Re: Monsters
Thank you so much for the critiques! After rereading the poem, I totally see where all of your criticisms are coming from; I constantly forget what tense I%u2019m writing in ...
Jan 12, 2023 -
Re: My Goodbye Poem.
Hey! I absolutely loved this poem! The whole piece felt very emotional and genuine. The rhyme scheme also gave this poem a really nice flow. Thank you for sharing this ...
Jan 12, 2023 -
Re: grow
Hey! I really love your poem; it encapsulates the feeling of being a teenager very well. Your word choice is absolutely phenomenal and it provides such beautiful imagery! Keep writing ...
Jan 9, 2023
