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summerdepressionexe

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fall - Chapter One

    I apologize if I got any of the Spanish wrong, I used google translate since I myself know minimal Spanish.

    Mar 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fall - Chapter One

    Mar 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    Yeah, this chapter was pretty short just because I needed to get some information out before I started with the plot, but other chapters will be much longer. Thanks for ...

    Feb 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    Thanks so much for the review! I always love hearing what people think of my dialogue because it is not really my strong suit. Also, Valeria and Nathaniel were not ...

    Feb 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Monsters

    *I am*, I have no clue where all the random characters came from, apologies.

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Monsters

    Thank you so much for the critiques! After rereading the poem, I totally see where all of your criticisms are coming from; I constantly forget what tense I%u2019m writing in ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Goodbye Poem.

    Hey! I absolutely loved this poem! The whole piece felt very emotional and genuine. The rhyme scheme also gave this poem a really nice flow. Thank you for sharing this ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: grow

    Hey! I really love your poem; it encapsulates the feeling of being a teenager very well. Your word choice is absolutely phenomenal and it provides such beautiful imagery! Keep writing ...

    Jan 9, 2023


The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes. *manly blush*
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