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A story about Super Smash Brothers? WIN.

Very deep. Emotions are great things to tell in poetry. i know that many people can understand that feeling. I liked the end a lot. It made me think.

wow thats deep. that would be a great beginning to a book well keep writing:)

Pretty good. It shows a good point. Is also hard to say things with rhyming poetry and i think that u explained it very well.