sueprin

Hi. I love your poem, but every work needs more improvement. So here's few little nitpicks when I die, promise to bring roses, not just any roses dark red roses ...

I'd love to see more. This is a very good story, and I like the was you wrote it. There is no problem on your plot I can see, all ...

This is a definatly a funny, good start to a novel. I can see your caracter perfectly. However, I think it is missing discription of how things look. Also,some sentences ...