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Re: Intoxicated
Wow, this is a really nice story! I thought it was nicely written. No grammatical errors or misspelled words and the quality of the writing is stellar. You also were ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: I will get out!
This is a good, scary story and I can't wait to read more to see what happens. There are a few moments when the writing becomes a little vague. For ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: A Man, His Two Daughters, and The Legacy Foretold (Part 1)
Hi roeckercody, An interesting read that I would love to hear the ending to, but I have a few issues. As a reader, I found the flow of the story ...
Aug 8, 2015 -
Re: Ugly Duckling
I like the concept of the story, and I also enjoyed the writing. However, I do have one concern. When you mentioned that the people of the town were "downright ...
Jul 22, 2015
