stygianmoon17

I’ll review this a bit later today, my car is on my laptop 😅 Just saying tho, I’ve got no idea what this is from, since I haven’t read the ...

To be true %u201Ceffortless%u201D wouldn%u2019t be exact for my poems, %uD83D%uDE05 I spend like a week not thinking about anything and then out of a blue a sentence comes to ...

Hey there, thanks a lot for the review, I can say you pretty much explained my poem better than I could ever do :) well apart for the more personal ...

Sorry about that %uD83D%uDE05 I%u2019m pretty sure you%u2019re talking about my other work.. the Da Worst one I think, where the bio was something like %u201Cif I were high on ...

Will review this later today*

Thanks a lot :) will do the same back ;)

40 chapters.. nevermind, 89 chapters (yes I counted).. wow.. I have no idea how u got the motivation to write all that 0-0, and I’d drop a review but, I’m ...

I mean yeah, it's grammarly xD

kay I admit that last line is pretty confusing xD basically, I mean it in the sense that the "doll" is the reflection of the narrator, and the reason why ...

I guess the last line is pretty confusing, basically, I meant to say that the doll is the reflection of the narrator, so the "screams" and "giggling" were basically her ...

you're wrong about the sadism, I may be French, but sadism is actually a word :P it's about the tendency to find pleasure by inflicting pain about someone or something ...

For the pain when making the formatting- oh you bet.. tho I don't see how the last sentence doesn't work. I guess it's maybe missing a pause between "smiling me ...

Oh you have no idea of my *patience*, since this was initially for a competition, I legit wrote this six times over because first it was two hundred words short, ...

Thanks for the review :) I know there's a lot of mistakes, I'm actually French and wow does writing in French and English are different. This comment really made my ...

Did you say brutal ? sure ; ) I'll review this a bit later today..