strawberryjacuzzi

This is good. I agree with the thesaurus comment from the guy below me. I like the actual content of this work, but I don't feel like enough was given ...

This is actually so cool. I've decided, after taking the time to wrap my mind around this, that I really like it. I love that this seems like your take ...

I like this piece. It is, in a way, kind of devastating. I have to agree with the reviewer below me. "Unbroken free" hits me as a little bit funny. ...

I do like this. I think that you should throw in some kind of twist before the last chorus, reflecting upon the beginning of the song, but showing some kind ...

I actually adore this. It's hard to find much wrong with it. Did you mean "like a knight swears to a king"? But like Savvy said, poetry is a flexible ...

This is beautiful, in a way I can't completely explain. I really enjoyed your imagery, and although I can't say I fully understand the story except for its face value, ...