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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Grandfather's Death

    Thank you so much for your review! I will take everything that you have said into consideration and look forward to reading some of your works! ;)

    Sat Nov 16, 2013 3:12 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Grandfather's Death

    Oh! Thank you so much! Depression was just a typo, and it was supposed to be hope! Haha! Thank you so much! ;)

    Sat Nov 09, 2013 3:02 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Deleted

    Hello my friend! Let me just start out by saying: THIS IS SOOOO SWEET!!! I absolutely love your poem! It is so touching! You're rhyming is superb and you grammar ...

    Fri Nov 08, 2013 3:09 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dispossession

    Wow! This poem is very touching... I could not find anything wrong with you grammar! You're style of writing was outstanding! This poem captivated me! I really enjoyed it! Keep ...

    Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:50 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ella's Story

    Thank you so much! I will definitely take this all in and apply!

    Thu Nov 07, 2013 11:55 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ella's Story

    Thank you so much! I'll revise this and work on what you have said! ;)

    Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:59 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ella's Story

    Thank you so much! Yes, there will be more of her flaws in the upcoming chapters! Don't worry! :) Thank you once again!

    Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:03 am
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Couplet Poem; Love

    Oh good! ;)

    Tue Nov 05, 2013 9:18 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Couplet Poem; Love

    I hope I didn't sound too pessimistic... It's a really beautiful poem! :) Any time!

    Tue Nov 05, 2013 8:29 pm
  • Other » General, General Re: Careless

    This is so remarkable! This is complete confirmation of what I have been feeling! You're writing is amazing! God bless you!

    Tue Nov 05, 2013 7:55 pm


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