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Re: For Lyndsey <3
This is really sweet. It reads like a fable almost, but so much more personal.The story would work fine without the wolf, but I imagine the author (it wasn't really ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Liar
This is a really powerful piece of writing, everything such strong emotion behind it. The only issue I have is with "I open my mouth. He swoops down, grasping the ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: I hate my life.
Short and somewhat bittersweet. I enjoyed this a lot (sort of, it's hard to enjoy feelings like that, but I like the way you bring them to the reader), perhaps ...
Feb 16, 2011