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Thanks i fixed the probably thing. And i purposely made Kimmy like that, she wants to believe she is different but in truth she is the same. And as for ...

thanks i didn't catch them. Fixed!

thank you for the reply. The website will ot let me indet the first chapter i don't know why but it will not. The dragons are kind of there since ...

This is a re-post of my story. I have six of the chapters done if you like please keep following for up dates i update it at least once a ...

p.s what is the name of the Story?

i really like this pice you reviewed my book the war of night and day and so i thought id return the favor. What i like most about this book ...

i really like this pice you reviewed my book the war of night and day and so i thought id return the favor. What i like most about this book ...

most of the things you said were ment to be they are old english and the silence is an analogy.

well thanks alot there is a map that gose alone with this story however i can not put pictures up on here but it shows the three kingdoms.

i have made many of the changes you pointed out and thank you i do plan on later on telling more about the dragons of the sun and the moon ...

thanks a lot 4 ur review i will work on it :P

I enjoyed it I would like to see more detail though the story and you wrote swiming around my room lol :D but over all a good start

sorry i had a mis-spell on the title it's The War of Night and Day.. My bad :P